Sunday, May 18, 2008

proven Innocent-chapter six

beard or not-he's still sexy!!!!
here is Chapter six:
Goren knocked on the door of 1261 Southern Garden Road. It was a small hme just on the outskirts of New York City. He knocked again.
"Wait a f***ing minute!" A gruff young man opened the door with a jerk. "What the hell do you want?" He asked still half asleep.
oren and Eames looked at each other before turning their attention back to the man. "I'm Detective Goren and this is Detective Eames."
The man glared at them, "Am I suppose to be impressed?"
"We're investigating a murder of a fellow policeman." explained Eames, hoping she could tone down the guy's attitude a little. She went on to explain who the officer was.
"Well, sugar-pie," he started. "I don't know what that has to do with me!" He took a drag from a cigarette that was dangling from his lips, before tossing it onto the ground.
"We got a message that says the killer is h ere." Goren remained calm. "Can I have your name, sir?"
The guy glared again at Goren, then took his hand and rubbed his chin before answering. "You're the detective! Why don't you do your detective work and figure it out?" The man was bout to go back into his house. "Now, unless you hve hard evidence against me, I suggest you get off of my porch!" He slammed the door, cursing and saying, "That f***ing *itch! Just wait until she gets home."
Goren and Eames stood there for a second just staring at each other. "If he doesn't act guilty, I don't know what is!" Eames said heading to the vehicle. Bobby ahd stopped to pick up the cigarette. "Can you believe that guy!?" She slammed the car door shut. She was so angry.
Bobby kept his mouth shut as Alex drove away. She mumbled all the way back to Major Case. Goren had never seen her so mad.
**********************************************************************************
Bobby took the cigarette to forensics before heading back to his desk. Eames was still fuming over that guy when he got there.
"I still can't get over that guy's attitude, Goren." She said as he sat down. She began typing on her laptop. "I'm checking to see if anything comes up for his address. What about that cigarette?"
"I took it to forensics and they are going to rush it for us, but unless he was a sexual predator, it's not going to give us much." answered Goren, anxious to what the internet had to say.
Suddenly Alex got something, "You are not going to believe this." She said sounding excited. "That address belongs to a Brandi Kolinksky and Jake Talbort. Sound familiar?" She looked at Goren.
"Brandi. Isn't that the waitress from jack's?" he asked.
"Yep. It sure seems to pulling itself together." She smiled, apparently hr anger had now subsided.
"Detectives! Office now!" demanded the captain as he walked past them.
They looked at each other before following their leader. Once inside the captain demanded to know why Ariana was released. Goren and Eames both explained what they ahd found out and also went on to tell him about the message and how the guy had acted.
"You can't arrest a guy because he acts suspicious." reminded the captain.
"well, I have a theor," replied goren.
Bobby was about tot ell the captain his thoughts when another officer came in with the results of the DNA fromt he cigarette. he looked over the report and then looked at Eames. "There was a match on t he DNA. It belongs to a Jake Talbort, no surprise there, but h ere's the ehadline. Jake was arrested by Officer Wittman for a burglary/rape that put hima way for 2 years. Coincidence, I think not."
"And he only got two years," scoffed Alex, "for rape."
The captain lsitened, then told them to pick him up. "I'm more than convinced now."
Both the partner's were more than happy to oblige.
It is almost finished. I sure hope you all liked it... Is any of it making sense? Sure hope so..

3 comments:

val said...

But does Bobby end up with the girl?

mary said...

Enjoying it!! It makes good sense.Like Val hope he gets the girl!!

aprilspring said...

You will have to wait until the end to find out if he gets the girl, but doesn't he deserve to get her?